LO4 - Analysis and application of findings Part 2 (P6,M3)

I was able to collect feedback from my teacher and understand what I need to do to make buy Ident better:

Ident 1

• Try not to use the ending My Little Pony part since it doesn't make sense 
• Add a voice over, kids maybe (I'll add AI voice over)
• The characters transitions on time

Ident 2

• Isn't it supposed to be night time? re film the background ton be night time  
• What could I add to make it different? new nighttime music and new characters
• Add kids voices, voice over

To improve my Ident I will use my teachers feedback and make it the best as my ability.